feedback on blog so far

Some work of a high quality posted on this blog however I do not get much of a sense of progression with reference to ideas - it is not evident that discussions are taking place with reference to actors, locations, actors or props. Analysis of music video needs revisiting and more attention to detail and reference to learning and theory needs to be added. I want to see a dated post after each lesson outlining discussions and decisions made. At the moment the blog is a low level 3.